TirzahLaughs's Profile
| Penname: | TirzahLaughs |
| Country: | United States |
| Web address: | whywouldyoueatthat.wordpress.com |
| Member type: | Author |
| Member Since: | May 5, 2008 |
| Bio: | I don't know who I am. All I know is that I need to write. It isn't perfectly formed or perfectly presented but it is me, there on the page. I'd love to tell you some fascinating story about my life but I live in a beige world. I write, I play with power tools, I talk to the dogs. I like to simplify. My personal life is as interesting as toast but in my words, I can live any way I want, be anyone I want. Isn't it wonderful? |
User Writings
| Title/Name | Date | Ranking | Reviews | Type | |
| May 30, 2008 | 152 | 46 | Novel | ||
My first novel attempt. This is about a woman... | |||||
| May 7, 2008 | 390 | 12 | Poetry | ||
Jazz (music) is the third member of a love... | |||||
| May 17, 2008 | 741 | 7 | Poetry | ||
REVISED--I moved the stanzas around as... | |||||
| May 14, 2008 | 382 | 9 | Poetry | ||
This poem is how we never feel like people... | |||||
| Jul 12, 2008 | 677 | 7 | Poetry | ||
Poem on moving to the suburbs. Do the stanzas... | |||||
| May 12, 2008 | 1302 | 4 | Poetry | ||
I love parts of this. Do you think the middle... | |||||
| May 10, 2008 | 1161 | 6 | Poetry | ||
A poem of someone who tries to show their love... | |||||
| May 5, 2008 | 1053 | 6 | Poetry | ||
REVISED--This is about how love is the social... | |||||
| May 5, 2008 | 1035 | 5 | Poetry | ||
Stanza three--is the last line workable? Is it... | |||||
| May 9, 2008 | 1235 | 5 | Poetry | ||
REVISED--I broke the stanzas up in smaller... | |||||
| May 19, 2008 | 502 | 7 | Poetry | ||
When I can't sleep and I'm going too fast, I... | |||||
| May 23, 2008 | 779 | 6 | Poetry | ||
Is the verb tense right? This is about when... | |||||
| May 26, 2008 | 283 | 9 | Poetry | ||
Is this generic? I am exploring religion and... | |||||
| Jun 1, 2008 | 407 | 9 | Poetry | ||
I'm trying to capture a memory, a feeling.... | |||||
| Jun 8, 2008 | 1607 | 3 | Poetry | ||
This poem may offend you. This is a poem about... | |||||
| Jun 15, 2008 | 368 | 9 | Poetry | ||
A piece on searching for that perfect word. | |||||
| Jun 26, 2008 | 418 | 7 | Poetry | ||
I'm interested lately in doing strong brief... | |||||
| Jul 1, 2008 | 168 | 14 | Poetry | ||
Is it to brief? I am trying to make brief be... | |||||
| Jul 18, 2008 | 580 | 7 | Poetry | ||
Does this work as is? I wrote this about last... | |||||
| Aug 21, 2008 | 192 | 11 | Poetry | ||
This may offend you, but is it to simple?... | |||||
| Aug 4, 2008 | 1105 | 4 | Poetry | ||
The ending is solid? | |||||
| Aug 15, 2008 | 942 | 5 | Poetry | ||
Is this stiff? Does it work as is? How to... | |||||
| Aug 19, 2008 | 365 | 9 | Poetry | ||
This is a different poetic style for me. Does... | |||||
| Jul 25, 2008 | 348 | 11 | Short Story | ||
I revised this, adding the background info and... | |||||
| May 5, 2008 | 336 | 19 | Short Story | ||
REVISED AGAIN--Thanks, it is so much better. A... | |||||
| May 9, 2008 | 506 | 10 | Short Story | ||
REVISED AGAIN! I'm still working on removing... | |||||
| May 22, 2008 | 563 | 9 | Short Story | ||
This story is about a man that is so caught up... | |||||
| Jul 5, 2008 | 418 | 10 | Short Story | ||
Is it spicy enough? To dull? What would you... | |||||
| Jul 15, 2008 | 25 | 23 | Short Story | ||
Looking as always for my ever present typos.... | |||||
| Aug 27, 2008 | 1351 | New | Short Story | ||
I dreamed I was editing this piece...so I woke... | |||||
