Content: lust

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I said I'd take a break and just review, but I couldn't help it. I was experimenting, playing around with this form. It's that common rut that a person in love (lust?) falls into-- everyone but you can see what a loser your lover is, and can't figure why you don't leave the jerk already. A little addiction, perhaps? I was having a conversation with a friend who was telling me about his latest crush, and I just got to thinking about all the people, and all the relationship woes of unevenly matched pairs. **26 Aug 08:I'm fiercely holding on to the repetitions, because I believe they are essential to the slightly crazed, deeply addicted feel. What I missed though, in the original version, was the breaks between the stanzas. Pehaps this may alleviate (some of) that rushing, confusing, dizzying look of the poem. If not, then it's not meant to be a pantoum-- I'll pare it down.

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this poem is about a man expressing his love for his girlfriend

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I'm interested lately in doing strong brief pieces. Yet, does this stand on its own? Would you change anything? This is on the edge of erotic so I'm warning you now. It doesn't cross over but it is close.

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There are things that lose their appeal in the harsh light of day. Or at least after the edge on the lust has subsided.

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A handsome male professional and his bosomy client; an infatuation, a refutation, a confrontation and a condemnation.

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.....pucker up!!

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a wild fire, a flood, a controlled burn... new love

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