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 | White flower dance | Nasp Semeku | Poetry | Fantasy | 1 | 0.00 | Sep 4, 2008 |
Summary:Summary:
Second part of Umbra's song series(See also: Twilight till night).
The minstrel ballad based on the winter festival of the Umbras, celebrating on the day when the moon was brightest.
A Female Umbra will clad in white robe to represent the moon as Male clad in black tunic, representing night that embraces the moon with twilight.
In short, The female will sing and the male will response within the verse of song before they join in the dance in the moonlight.
Feedback:
Unlike the prior poem, I want to make this one a festive song for a winter festival.
I had never tried on this sub-genre as well so any feedback would be the most precious and most appreciate.
Nasp Semeku,
Wished Thailand would be as peaceful as one's writing...Chapters: |
| Twilight till night | Nasp Semeku | Poetry | Fantasy | 2 | 0.00 | Aug 23, 2008 |
Summary:Summary: The Minstrel ballad originately sung by an Umbra-- an offspring between a werewolf and uninfected human.
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This is a poem I made for my fantasy writing. I don't know how I'm going to implement in,but my intendion was to make it a childish lullaby since It will be sung by the troubador to the child "character".
Comments on grammarical error and how it impact readers' emotion would be the most appreciate.
Nasp Semeku,
What will happen to werewolf's tranformation when a Lunar Eclipse occur? Chapters: |
| Crossing the threshold | MartyK | Poetry | Poetry | 4 | 1.37 | Aug 18, 2008 |
Summary:Teen suicideChapters: |
| Moon Frown | kat nove | Poetry | Poetry | 11 | 0.26 | Aug 5, 2008 |
Summary:I recently saw a drawing of the moon with a frowning face and decided to attempt another chaiku.
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| Fireflies In A Mason Jar | Sideman | Short Story | Other | 7 | 0.46 | Jul 25, 2008 |
Summary:I wrote this a number of years ago. My wife is from Bakersfield, Califirnia where fireflies are only a rumor or a myth. When I drug her to St. Louis, she was in awe of the "lightning bugs". I started telling her about my childhood experiences with those little fly by night critters. That evening I sat down an wrote this. That was in late 1997.
I wasn't sure if this should be regarded as a memoir or not, so I put it in the "other" genre. Any thoughts about that?
I am posting this with the hope that you might enjoy it and offer any comments about ways to make it more engaging or flow more smoothly. I want it to be a casual read that leaves the reader with slight smile or a warm feeling. I am not an educated writer. I am open to any and all comments and suggestions. Thanks!Chapters: |
| Hot-Wired | TirzahLaughs | Poetry | Poetry | 7 | 0.28 | May 19, 2008 |
Summary:When I can't sleep and I'm going too fast, I need to slow down, rest but I can't, I just can't. Here is one of those nights.Chapters: |
| Without Gravity | TirzahLaughs | Poetry | Poetry | 7 | 0.21 | May 17, 2008 |
Summary:REVISED--I moved the stanzas around as suggested, killed the ugly semi-colon. The 'Yet,gravity' still doesn't seem quite right. Poem on the freedom of sky...and floating away.Chapters: |
| Moon-Mad | Mack Gilley | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.36 | Mar 17, 2008 |
Summary:A "word picture" that hopefully captures one of life's special moments. All feedback appreciated.Chapters: |
| Illumine | Sapsorrow | Poetry | Poetry | 7 | 0.32 | Apr 30, 2007 |
Summary:Wakeful hours tending to a fire of the belly. If you wait out the night, the day will surely come.
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| Nocturne I A Hymn to Night | pearlvisions | Poetry | Poetry | 3 | 0.47 | Jul 14, 2006 |
Summary:This was inspired by the song Barcarolle, by Offenbach, a hymn to the night.Chapters: |
