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This is a poem I wrote its called too fast. Any and all feedback is welcome

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Back in the 70s, I lived in San Antonio, Texas for about five years. I played lead guitar in a country band while I was there. I would see all these guys in their Stetson hats and Tony Lama boots trying to impress the ladies. My guess...you put any one of them on a horse and they'd crap all over themselves. I got to thinking abnout it and wondered when the last TRUE cowboy would eventually disappear. This is what I came up with. Any and all comments welcomed.

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This is a poem I rewrote from afew weeks ago. Any feedback is welcome.

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I originally wrote this as a song back in 2004. It is registered with BMI, my Performance Rights Organization, thus I have to include the original copyright information. I have slightly reformatted the verses/stanzas to fit a more traditional format for poetry. I originally wrote it for my recently deceased mother-in-law. But, as I post it here as a poem, I have Michelle (mishmont) and Dave in my heart. Any comments about the message of the poem are more than welcome. Since this has already been published as a song, technical and structural nits won't be necessary. Thank you very much in advance.

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A short poem on the importance of attitude in life... Looking for feedback on relevance and if these words inspire the desire to take a Leap of Faith...

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CAUTION: YOU MIGHT NOT WANT TO READ THIS IMMEDIATELY PRIOR TO DINNER, OR LUNCH, OR... Just a silly little thing that crossed my mind. After reading this, you'll probably wonder if I even have a mind! It's totally tasteless and has no redeeming qualities what so ever. But, I follow my muse...she insists! Feedback? Well, if you're desperate for credits!

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This work is from the novel, Corporate Samurai "love begets hate, trust begets betrayal, lust leads to death". It attempts to convey the emotions and thoughts, in song form, of a woman Samurai to the one true love of her life--who is also a Samurai. This song is written at a time when she suspects their relationship will not be sustainable, as her lover comes from a much inferior heritage than her own--something her family will not accept.

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Any comments you have are quite welcome. This is a very personal piece. Although it is written in first person, it is not about me, per se. But, the experiences and the emotions were taken form my personal experiences in Vietnam. I hope I have adequately conveyed the emotions I felt as I wrote this. It is written in my normal straight-forward, simple rhyming (AABB) format. Thanks in advance for having taken the time to read this.

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This is my very first post. I very seldom write poetry. When I do, it is simple and straight forward. "Turning" is a quick and simplistic look at the various roles we play in the chapters of our lives. As our roles change, we must turn the page and start a new chapter. This started out as a lyric to a song. But, I found it better suited as a poem than as a lyric. For those of you who do not know, I am a songwriter and musician. As far as feedback, I'd like to hear any comments of any sort about this. Is it confusing, out of order, etc? From a technical POV, I'm am fairly illiterate about writing poetry. I simply write what comes to mind. Novels are my strength. But, I kind of like this piece. Thanks in advance!

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Is it to brief? I am trying to make brief be enough?

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I'm interested lately in doing strong brief pieces. Yet, does this stand on its own? Would you change anything? This is on the edge of erotic so I'm warning you now. It doesn't cross over but it is close.

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When I can't sleep and I'm going too fast, I need to slow down, rest but I can't, I just can't. Here is one of those nights.

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Making love with words...

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Ever imagine what a poet dreams?

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An ode to my father...Horace Silver's "Song For MY Father" just happened to be what I was listening to at the time.

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Sometimes in the hustle and bustle of an ordinary day I suddenly feel a rush of joy. I call it bliss.

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My boyfriend and I met on Valentine's Day and this poem was written for him on the next Feb. 14. Every word is true.

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Can I reach the top?

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