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This is a story about a girl who finds herself in a lost world of vampires and witches. I'm looking for any kind of feedback to help make my story stronger. Any grammatical errors, sentences that don't make sense, anything I can expand on, etc...

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Basic summary: There have been three people murdered in New York City, all of whom have no physical injuries or wounds, yet cause of death is blood loss. Serena Weller, a current college student, is all too familiar with these types of deaths and knows that she needs to take steps to find the vampire(s) behind it and stop them. Feedback: I'm specifically looking for feedback on my characters and their development (or anything that is unclear). Please correct any grammar that is off. I've tried to proofread, but...you know how it is. Also, please point out any flaws in the plot (anything illogical, unrealistic, too banal, etc).

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Sit in a Starbucks, pick a guy, suck on your finger and wink, and you can most likely option a bedfellow, should you want him. Nobody knows this better than Sara Friche, a good-hearted and independent paramour. Outwardly a graphic artist, Sara lives a secret life as Velvet the courtesan. Striving for true intimacy, Sara courts her lonely clients through the Internet personals, then brings them into her world to share laughter, friendship and orgasms. Even for carefree women, though, love sometimes comes with loss. When Sara's favorite patron dies, and inquisitive wife Charlene appears on her doorstep, Sara realizes that her life may not be as comfortably predictable as she expects. When Sara falls in love with new patron Lyon, wealthy playboy Daniel rushes in to regain ownership of his courtesan. The two men compete fiercely for Sara, crushing her soul in a fiery clash of wills, however with the help of girlfriend Stacy, and wife Charlene, Sara regains her footing, discovering the depths of love, and the man who truly loves her.

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The second installment in the trilogy of the Miles Sisters. Thirty-four year old Jackie Miles runs out on her wedding. Who could blame her? The man she is about to marry, is the same man who beat her severly and left her unconscious. Thirty-one year old Alex Davenport has been in love with Jackie all his life; from the time they were children playing together in their back yards, to the one night of passion they shared so many years ago, on the night she buried her father. Can Alex open her eyes and make her see the love he's always had for her? Or will she close her heart to love forever?

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My first novel attempt. This is about a woman transformed into a werewolf against her will. Tess has to find her way in a world where none of the rules are clear to her. She makes mistkes that risk both her and her younger sister's life. One of her mistakes takes the form of a rogue werewolf who she accidently entices into a mating dance. Plus, those that transformed her seek her for capture and study. She'll have to learn to embrace her animal or be destroyed by it. At this point, I just want to know if the story is compelling. Do the characters work? Do you want to read more?

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A poem of someone who tries to show their love in in hidden gestures.

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Synopsis - In Celia Reynolds eyes, life is perfect. She has a wonderful loving family including a sister that is her best friend. Her career is skyrocketing and she has more male admirers than she can keep up with. Then, her world is shattered when her sister Gabi takes her own life. As she questions her sister’s suicide and peels back the layers of her ideal life, she realizes that life is not perfect nor is it meant to be. Her journey of self discovery takes her from an elegant 20th floor apartment in New York City to Washington, DC and the Islands of South Carolina. Along the way she learns a family secret that forces her to see her self and her sister in a different light - all with help from some unlikely sources - an orangutan named Nikkee and a Voodoo Priestess named Mira. *** Requests - All I can ask for is honest feedback. Give it to me straight ; ).

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Sam Tabor is a bright child with a promising future, but when her alcoholic mother gets a new boyfriend, her world starts to fall apart piece by piece. Sam hits the streets and stumbles into The Mercury Diner, where she’s told by a kind waitress to seek out a man by the name of Bruno, who can be found in The Jungle. After years in The Jungle, Bruno’s business partner calls in a debt. Sam’s world crumbles again, but a man with multiple identities intercedes on her behalf, and believes the young girl will be safeguarded in a maximum security prison. Out of jail, Sam is offered a safe place to live, but is she really freed from her past, and danger?

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Stanza three--is the last line workable? Is it too much alliteration? This is a play on the idea of the Tinman.

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REVISED AGAIN--Thanks, it is so much better. A man sleeps with his friend and regrets it. Not for the reasons you think but because he has a dark secret that may destroy both of them.

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REVISED--This is about how love is the social lubricant of a relationship...and how you want what you want and you can't change that.

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Will Bucklett returns home after the Civil War to find his mother dying of a mysterious illness. His father has been taken hostage by a ruthless band of traitors and Army deserters. The leader of the gang, ex-Colonel John Bullard, has threaten to kill Will’s father, Silas Bucklett, unless Silas discloses the location a certain missing alleged Government gold shipment. Outraged, Will vows to free his father and bring Bullard and his gang to justice. With his younger brother, Dain and a long time friend of the family, Booger Red, a half-breed tracker, Will sets his sights west to the last known location of the renegades, Tascosa, Texas. a sanctuary for outcast and criminals

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A love affair with the my beloved jazz

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Bronte a fiercely independent woman who, in her early thirties, is unsure that the life she has lead up until now is one that is built upon truth. Through a series of events and the continuous unfolding of a lifelong mystery she comes to learn things about herself, her family and love that she was never inclined to delve into before. I'm looking for all type of feedback. If you think it I'd love to hear it!

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Oh no! Another romance novel from a lady that can't finish the first one she started. This is my NaNo project and I will admit right now that it's raw and has no editing. I'm going with the flow and writing it before editing, or I'm afraid I'll get too hard on myself and abandon it. All crit toward what I need to edit will be very much appreciated. Allison Crawford is a waitress living the simple life, always pushing her dreams to the side. When a tradgedy throws Lane Bishop into her life, nothing will ever be the same.

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2nd in a series. **************** This is not a supernatural tale, but an attempt at police procedural in which lycanthropy is a mental condition - the plot centres more on the chaos caused by the werewolf sightings than the wolf itself. ********** plot: Something dark and hairy roams the steep parklands that flank the suburbs of Alcove. A mauled body is found in the crawlspace of an abandoned house. Young DC Cal Dion, recovering from car crash injuries and newly reinstated in his home office, is set upon a trail that zigzags between murky dangers, howlings in the night, peculiar coworkers, and an edgy romance.

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PAUL WEEKES knows all about poverty, after a harsh childhood spent raising both himself and his younger cousin Mark, who refuses to grow up. He now runs a farm on the island of Xantrope, cultivating ground provisions and marijuana for export, because he refuses to risk a return to the poverty of his past. Things get complicated when the corrupt police officer who facilitates Paul decides he wants a bigger cut of the illicit business. Worse, Mark is involved in a murder and a hit-and-run accident involving the police officer’s niece. Paul has his hands full coping with danger from Mark’s associates, orchestrated attempts to hijack his goods, keeping himself alive and pursing a romantic interest. ******For want of somewhere else to put this, I've termed it Other. It can best be described as Romantic Suspense.

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I came up with the perfect excuse for why I'd be spending so much time with Gabe. Okay, so with Sam there could never be a good reason for me spending time with Gabe, but this would have to do: The Tri-County Martial Arts Tournament. I would explain to Sam that I have a burning desire to kick some serious tail at the tourney and Gabe was going to be my own private tutor. Yikes. He would hate it. But it beat telling him the truth. Hey, Sam, guess what? Gabe is actually a higher being. He was sent here to find me. My migraines - well, I've been meaning to tell you this, but I really do see dead people, and all sorts of scary stuff, but it's okay, because you see, Sam, I'm The Seer. That's right, I'm The Seer. And I'm the only thing standing between a race of higher beings that you've never heard of before and utter annihilation. I have to spend hours with Gabe every week because I'm the Obi-Wan to their Princess Leia. I'm their only hope. He'd call for the Straightjacket Brigade immediately. Who'd believe a story like that--especially with a history of mental illness in the family? No, The Tri-County Martial Arts Tournament would have to do.

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-Summary- "Get a Clue" Madelyn Berichon, (or if you'd rather not risk bodily injury you can call her Maddi) an accomplished Paralegal/Criminal Profiler in Atlanta, moved to Seagate Island for a fresh start, leaving behind a shattered relationship and taking with her some old emotional baggage and a cat named Orphan Annie. Maddi is what you might call a powerful petite. At first glance she is five feet three inches of slim, blond, blue eyed cuteness (never let her hear you call her cute). After getting to know her a little better, you'll find that she's a compact package of dyno'mite'. On assignment on Seagate Island, Maddi embarks on an exciting and overtly dangerous roller coaster ride to find a vicious killer and prove the innocence of the law firm’s client, while covertly carrying out her mission. Along the way she meets her match in Mac Adams, a freelance investigative journalist. Of course there comes into play the inevitable conflict between paralegal/client confidentiality and the journalistic need for information, but they handle it in a mature adult manner (most of the time). Maddi is undercover as a Paralegal with, Mathews, Rickert and Lyndel, Attorneys at Law. Robert Mathews, the only living member left in the firm and one of two lawyers on the Island, desperately needed the help of a sharp, intelligent paralegal like Maddi. He had been commissioned by millionaire humanitarian William Patterson to defend his son Josh who was charged with the murder of Deborah Jennings, the owner of a local Import/Export business. She was found bludgeoned on the floor of her shop among the artifacts that she had been unpacking. It seems that Josh was found by the police standing over the body with the murder weapon in his hand. Maddi finds herself questioning people such as, Senatorial candidate Rodney Maten and his wife Vallerie, son Nick and Daughter Laurel. They seem to be friendly and cooperative on the surface, yet there is an undercurrent of trepidation. She finds that many of the upper crust "Native Islanders" have more than their share of skeletons in their closets and their lives are full of secrets that they will do almost anything to keep private. In the course of their investigation Mac and Maddi uncover a plot that reaches to the very core of the elite society of the Island and abroad. It's an abhorrent situation that involves drug cartels and politicians and cold blooded murder. It is a conspiracy so intriguingly incredible that she has difficulty convincing authorities and even her own boss that it actually exists. While putting her own life in danger Maddi must make sense of it all, complete her assignment, clear Josh and deal with a budding romance with Mac. She does all this and more in that engagingly funny, candid, one-of-a-kind Maddi way.

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Allie Carpenter, a rising young pianist goes missing during a celebratory evening with friends at a nightclub. I would be most grateful for feedback on mistakes in everything from typos to chronology, things which don't "gel" This is the umpteenth edit and as I need to get it BACK on the site as FAST as possible, I am going to double-bunk chapters where they fit inside the 5000 word limit and try to post once every 24 hours.) THE FIRST POSTING IS CHAPTERS 1-2

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This is raw, a work in progress. I'm taking a risk here, going out of my comfort zone by putting up something that's not yet finished. I’m hoping you’ll see some growth from me in this. Sapphire Reign takes place almost 10 years after Kings & Queens. I’d appreciate reviews from readers, who've read my first book, since they can (hopefully) see what I’m doing differently and if it’s working, but anyone is welcome to read this. However, since it is a sequel, spoilers abound. So only proceed if you have no intention of reading Book 1.

My mini-sum now: In a world where wickedness is exalted and an evil agenda is corrupting the young and innocent, a 26-year-old woman, trapped in the grip of agony, receives a glimmer of hope and battles heaven and hell to reclaim the happiness that's been stripped from her. ***Minor change. I originally had this about 10 years later, then switched it to 8. Now it's closer to 10 again. I forgot I had placed Majesty's sister Skye in high school. She's 15 in this story.

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"When Two Trails Become One" has a western flair that takes place in 1972, with flashbacks to 1940, and mainly centers on Jessie and Clayton as they essentially find each other again after about three decades. A "loveless marriage" and a less than fulfilling "relationship" start Jessie looking back on her past, which begins to virtually overlap with the present. In numerous twists and turns, the story explores the complexities of human nature, highlighting qualities relating to identity, beliefs, and love in various forms. The story opens with Jessie feeling "annoyed that her seclusion is in danger of being interrupted by 'some city slicker' on horseback who wouldn't have the foggiest notion of how to find his way back down the mountain after dark." Her feelings about Jace Edwards, her live-in lover, take something of a turn, and saying "I'll be back in two weeks," she heads out for a ride up on Cry Baby Mountain to the cabin she and Clayton had discovered all those years ago. Over the last thirty-one years thoughts of Clayton had surfaced at random and usually at the most inconvenient times. Her father viewed Clayton as a 'worthless drifter' and had told Jessie she was never to lay eyes on him again, and Clayton felt Jessie didn't stand up for him. As the narrative moves back and forth in time marking certain experiences that may lead to a reunion of sorts, Jessie and Clayton strive to reconcile their individual motivations and responses. When she seemingly goes missing, a rescue team takes action and the sheriff commences an investigation into 'who attacked Jessie up on Cry Baby Mountain.' In the concluding pages of the story, the sheriff focuses a degree of attention toward Dakota Jay, a longtime friend of both Jessie and Clayton. A journal entry from Clayton furnishes some potentially unexpected information, and Jessie ponders whether or not, in her overzealous quest to find Clayton, maybe she had overlooked some important details. With elements of suspense and emotion, this offering is designed to capture the imagination as well as to provoke thought. The possibility of a sequel is left open with Jessie heading down "a dirt road with Clayton's blue hand-painted truck just ahead" and thinking to herself, "sometimes love isn't so much about what you give as it is what you don't give."

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Elise has witnessed the destruction of Earth by Aliens. The aliens turn out to be all too human, ascended from Earth's past. She, and hundreds of other women, are enslaved by their new masters and discover they are to be trained in a unique skill. What could cause these distant earth cousins to annihilate nearly the entire population on Earth? Elise will discover that even the all powerful Emperor Gregor vlor'Malita has something to fear and he is bound and determined to mold her into a tool, against her will, to fight this battle.

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Words and intimacy...what a combination

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"Mrs. Brown's Cat" is my first story, written in the 1970's. It is characteristic of my beginning writing skills--or lack of them. Several months ago, I edited the story, taking out a third of it, mostly in the beginning, during Kevins first trip into the past. I don't know if it would fly in today's market. Make suggestion if you think it would, and where to send it.

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Just thinkin' bout my baby one night.

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Beautiful, talented, and about to inherit – Why is Sarah’s heart in turmoil...? Sarah Miller, the new darling of the Chamber Music Society, the protégée cellist of their in-house Quartet, receives rave reviews for her first series of concerts. She has just buckled her last term at New York’s prestigious music academy of Julliard when a hit-and-run driver strikes her down and disrupts her plans. Luckily unscathed, engagements still need postponing until proper exercises can restore agility and full mobility to her bruised wrist. While the melody is interrupted, Sarah meets up with the formidable Spinner brothers. The younger Mark, handsome and charming, sweeps her off her feet. The elder Julian, black sheep, black belted, and daunting black mood enjoys badgering and humiliating her. Her wrist recovered, playing music again, Sarah wonders which exercises will mend a bruised ego and an aching heart. ...Perhaps it’s because she is unworldly, unsophisticated – an orphan raised by tutors and nannies who ran to the bright lights of New York City...only to slam into the dark heart of Julian Spinner.

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This is a draft of a story that i have been wanting some feedback on, so please let me know what you think.

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Making love with words...

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Premise: Love midst danger can be found anywhere in the universe. I began this novel about two years ago. I have completed about two-thirds of it. It is about a man, John Smith, a widower who found an empress who won him in a murder trial. It is better to start at the beginning, but if you have read up to here and have not reviewed the chapters,feel free to jump in.

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The main characters are JOSEPH HIGHLANDER, a medical doctor and a surgeon, and PAMELA MYLAR. Pamela heard about the bombing of Joseph’s helicopter. The reported causalities were him, his wife, CARRIE and two close friends, BEN and BECKY TRENT. Two years later, she learned that it was the pilot, not Joseph, who died in the bombing. She visited Joseph, and soon learned that ROBERT and JANICE DAEMON, two more of Joseph's faithful friends had taken charge of the institute, while he had gone underground to search for the murderer. Joseph’s daughter, LAUREL HIGHLANDER stayed with them for a while and then, married her stepbrother, JIMMY HIGHLANDER. Both Jimmy and Laurel were interested in the institute.

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Revised: The first four chapters have been revised taking reviews into consideration. Also, the original Chapter 3 is now Chapter 2, while 4 is 3, and 2 has the 4 slot - all of which will effect the attached reviews. Does the shuffling help or hinder? This novel is set within an orphanage in North Carolina during the mid fifties and sixties. Though it is basically true, the characters are composite and the time lines may be occasionally altered with some literary license thrown into the mix. I am looking for ANYTHING which might improve the readability, especially with regards to characters, dialogue, description, etc. Thanks!

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Any and all feedback is welcome. It's a rewrite, so I really need to know about the revised scenes.

Sarah stared at the shower's tile wall in front of her, barely feeling the hot water beating against her naked back. She breathed the steam-filled air deeply, trying to keep the tears at bay as she felt a piece of her soul die. It took no time to wash the blood off her skin. Once again, she looked down at her hands, thinking of just how a couple of weeks ago she was happy. She was human.

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no....not a PICTO!!! just an ordinary poem on a highly original subject that no one has ever thought to write about before! ha!

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A writer and copy editor for The Denver News, Tarin McGyver is single and lives on the shore of a lake near a small Colorado mountain town. After a chance encounter with Jonathan Parker - lead singer with a popular rock band - Tarin finds herself thrust into the music world, where she discovers her own success as a songwriter. Her relationship with Jonathan, however, is undermined by someone from Tarin's past, someone who mysteriously lurks in the background continually trying to destroy any chance she might have to find happiness.

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Premise: Teens in profane 1970s New York get cast in a High School production of Romeo and Juliet and are moved to passion and violence in their real lives. I begin with a quote from the Queen Mab speech in Romeo and Juliet, and also this 2007 quote from Lizzie Ratner of the New York Observer: "A lot has changed from a quarter-century ago or so, when our fair city was best known for graffiti-decorated subways, blasting boom boxes and the faint smell of urine rising from the summer pavement. … The dog shit was piled so high in the streets you needed a mountain ax just to traverse the sidewalk—but we liked it. The buildings were so blackened by grime you could barely see them in the dark—but we liked it. The subways were so dangerous you felt you were descending into Hell—and we liked it, we loved it, hallelujah!" Violence, sex, romance, drugs, religion, and Shakespeare's poetry through the eyes of gritty teens from Brooklyn and Queens.

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...ahhh, the romance, the prospect of wedded bliss squashed into a PICTO of a bell like this! ...ooops, sorry to ruin it with the cynical twist!!

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...i should probably hold this rose back until valentines day but it popped into my head and has been hammering to be released as a PICTO here and now ...so here it is! phew! that's one less headache!!

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This is a drabble entry. I wanted to convey what Thanksgiving can mean.

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A Sunday morning ritual for two lonely people.

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When Detective Theodore Gill discovers a serial killer has breeched the small town of Chelsea, Michigan he realizes quickly that the investigation will be the hardest case he’s ever worked. Bizarre and strange things are happening to the victim’s bodies after they are murdered, and evidence simply vanishes. Mandy Steven’s has been assigned to work with Gill on the case, and together they are led down the dark path of deceit, as the man responsible for the murders taunts them, with trickery, and sometimes a treat, and before long the two of them become a part of the killer’s charade. When their world suddenly advances several months into the future over night, Mandy and Gill realize it is only a matter of time, before they too fall victims, to the dark man’s magic, and suddenly they become trapped in a game of cat and mouse when Tessa Johnson, and several of their co-workers disappear. When their investigation leads them to an old cemetery, Gill and Mandy find themselves trying to piece the clues together, about the black cats, the deserted cemetery building, and the wild bats, that the dark man is leaving behind. Soon the two of them realize, the dark man is much too powerful, and every lead they investigate, brings them closer to their own demise. What Gill and Mandy know is it is only a matter of time, before the dark man catches the two of them, and decides who’s going to live or die, and when it’s time for a: TRICKERY TREAT

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This is part two of a short story about two historians traveling into the past to verify historical events. One returns but the other one remains stuck in the past. Will he be able to devise a way to return to his own time?

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This is a short story of almost 5000 words I am posting in two parts. I wrote it in 1994 and only recently corrected some of the grammar. I got the idea from the collapse of a walkway during a tea dance at the Hyatt Regency Hotel in Kansas City in 1981. The collapse killed 114 persons and injured more than 200 in the giant ballroom.

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When three childhood friends grow up together, in Clearwater Florida, they realize they share more then being best of friends. They share a serial killer whose on the lose. When they find out their the next victims on his list, there friendship teaches them the meaning of life, and what it means to fight to stay alive, not only for themselves, but for each other. For Jennifer, Gail and Liz, life has always been fun. The three of them have always done what they wanted, without giving much thought to anything else. Being so much alike, yet different, the three of them shared everything, from growing pains, to broken hearts, graduation, to college and finally their own independence. Now as the serial killer closes in, he leaves clues behind, for the three of them, and suddenly they find themselves at odds with one another, pointing their finger at anyone and everyone, including the three new men in their life. When they’re forced to face the demons from their past, they learn to trust one another all over again, as it becomes evident that their only hope of survival is to stick together and keep their eyes open, and Don’t Blink.

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The warmth of her body soothes me, as she gradually turn, uncoiling muscles...

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Just one musing over love.

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Sarah moves to Santa Fe, New Mexico after great tragedy to live a normal life. Instead, her tragic past slams into her present, bringing on strange events which lead her to a future she was born to live. She discovers some of her childhood monsters are real and some myths are true.

I welcome blunt, truthful reviews.

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When Lina, a thirty-two-year-old nurse, takes a live-in job in a Seattle retirement home, her life acquires two disturbing twists: she learns that ghosts have haunted the old house since a manslaughter-suicide in the 1930s; and she finds herself falling for her mysterious twenty-something coworker Ren, who seems to know more about the strange house than he is telling. Genre note: I've recently switched the genre from "romance" to "literary fiction," but really it's a mix of those and "paranormal" and a few others--just plain old "commercial fiction" would probably be the best label. Thanks to those who have commented with the suggestions!

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A love affair with jazz

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Making choices can be a most difficult proposition.

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Pitching a little woo with words.

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Love is not always what it appears

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This was a challenge presented to me by another poet to use the words Vanilla, honey, rainbows, copper, and kiss in each stanza of a poem...more difficult than it appeared.

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This is a poem about past loves, frustrations, and finally meeting The One.

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Another jazz inspired piece that kind popped up while listening to the soundtrack of the movie "Love Jones".

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What do a young, disillusioned man, a baseball fan, and an anarchist lesbian from Switzerland have in common?**** Mick, who dislikes his job, isn’t sure about his wife, disdains work at any level and desperately wants a massage. Max, who has no job, loves his wife, loves baseball but not the players, and wonders what to do next with his life. And Holly Al-Gutentag, an equal rights anarchist and lightly armed pacifist lesbian from Switzerland.**** These three seemingly unrelated lives each have their unique problems. Witness the slow boil to fruition, ultimately symbolized by Lady Liberty herself. Find out why they’re PISSED — and how three separate stories can have the same ending.**** (86,500 words.) NOTE: PLEASE START AT THE BEGINNING. Thank you.

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Cupid's arrow strikes a young lad (the author)in this hilarious true story. Only Cupid's aim is a tad off! This is the honest to God true story of what happened to me the moment I realized what GIRLS were! Everything that happens in this story really happened to me on a warm summer day in 1975!

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This short story was posted last year and then taken down from the site. I apologise to anyone who has read it before, I don't want to bore you! I have never submitted it a magazine or competition. Taking the advice of my good reviewers, I have edited it as the reviews have come in. I don't want to re-write and re-post again, it would try everyone's tolerance too far!

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When a shy, black, ballerina from a poor neighborhood is thrust into the affluent yet equally dangerous world of the prestigious Bridgeton academy, she is forced to overcome her insecurities in order to defeat the three most ruthless and vindictive girls in the school. I have an agent for this book and I'm on my final edit before he submits it to a publisher. Any help is welcome. Even chapter jumpers are welcome if you comment on grammar, especially commas and verb tense, and whether the overall writing style hooks you. Also, if chapter jumpers could comment specifically on what I can do to make it more engaging, that would be greatly appreciated. Please note: You never find out the main character's name. Not until book three anyway.

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A beautiful, young Cheyenne girl, shunned by her own people and the whites who raised her, falls in with a band of outlaws. Luke Winslow loves her deeply, and scours the west to find the girl who must stay one step ahead of the law.

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In the semi-small town of Cedar Creek, some people don’t care to lock their doors, even though the woods hold secrets and the children are terrified to venture into them. The warm sense of security is shattered for Majesty Alistair, a feisty but grief-stricken teen, when she uncovers a mass murder plot deep in the thick. She struggles to find and defeat the would-be-killers before they act, but they have an agenda far bigger than she ever assumed. Violence rocks the town, leaving residents reeling and drawing Majesty into the middle of it all. With danger always pressing, police seemingly getting nowhere and those closest to her looking guilty, she continues hunting and charges into an evil web, but the truth and her actions threaten to haunt her forever, especially since she’s left with blood on her hands, the blood of someone she loves.

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What makes a human, human? Are heroes born, bred, or created?

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ON HOLD. I've got some serious re-working of this to do. But any crit while I'm doing it is still appreciated in a big way!

Things are about to change in a big way... ///

Aggie Wilson is a realistic, responsible ED nurse who values her job and her family. In her world, there isn't time for the fantastic and anything out of the ordinary only exists in books and movies. That is, until she meets North Anthony - a self-proclaimed Vampire Hunter with a stake in his belt and a sexy smirk on his face. ///

North comes barreling into her life one night long past midnight, when Aggie is shaking off the fatigue of another work day and preparing to go home to her only relationship at the moment: her crazy cat. Arrogant and enigmatic, North saves her from a vampire and drags her off to parts unknown, turning everything Aggie knows upside down and inside out - including her lackluster sex life. ///

Their chemistry is instantaneous, but not enough to keep them alive when the vampires come knocking. North will keep Aggie safe at all costs, but his dedication to his hunting might keep her too safe - from him and from a chance at true love.///

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To whom does The People's Champion belong? The people or himself? That's the question foundling(orphan) Jakund Frey'lnd, a gifted young swordsman and war hero dubbed "Kid Blade," struggles with as he battles the ferocious Gothari and learns that his fame as warrior makes him a target for those looking to make a name for themself as well as an unwilling player in the games of the powerful. This is a Young Adult Fantasy, filled with humor and action, designed to appeal to all ages.

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Devon Greyson is the most beautiful and sweet girl Seth Caine has ever met. When Seth realizes that he allowed her into his heart and into his soul, he can’t help but protect her. Then Devon’s life and well being are threatened by a mad man and Seth would do anything to save her, including becoming a cold blooded killer.

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When Kayla and her best friend’s husband nearly start an affair she realises that now is the ideal time to go on a journey of self discovery, but how far will she get before circumstances force her to return home to more than she bargained for?

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A little story about: a man, a woman, two muses, and a box, but not necessarily in that order

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This is a continuation of "A Touch of Seduction", currently available on the tNBW Publication page. If you have not read that story, please do so before reading this, as it is necessary for context. I intended to do this as a short story, but it is clear that it will run well over 5,000 words, so I am posting it as a novel. It will be more like a novella, unless the characters do something even more unexpected than they have so far.

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When Mike Foley arrives at his San Diego home to find the police ransacking it because his former lover implicated him in a murder, he and Rosemary Sanchez, his ex-girlfriend and current partner, are plunged into an adrenalin-charged odyssey filled with dirty money, high comedy and low characters. Can they stay alive and clear Foley's name while grappling with their own complicated relationship and the re-emergence of Clare Rousseau, the woman who tore them apart?

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