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This is a lesson I learned as a twelve year old boy that I have never forgotten. It has affected my whole life.

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Teen suicide

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this poem is about a man expressing his love for his girlfriend

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This is a revised version of a short short story that I wrote back in high school. It plays on the word fisherman.

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Please be gentle. Looking for feedback about theme and content.

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Revised: All the chapters have been revised. The novel is posted in its entirety so you may read at your leisure. There has been some shuffling so the previous reviews may not always match up with the chapter that it is attached to (likewise with the chapter number in the text). I have eleminated the prologue up front, reduced/deleted substantial segments and excess wordage throughout, and simplified speaker modifiers throughout. I have tried to cull a lot of the "was" without diluting the voice of the narrator (Does it work?). I hope this final go through will make it ready to publish, so any comments whatsoever will be appreciated - punctuation, character, dialgoue, flow, ANYTHING you think would improve the readability. This novel is set within an orphanage in North Carolina during the mid fifties and sixties. Though it is basically true, the characters are composite and the time lines may be occasionally altered with some literary license thrown into the mix - so, I have changed the genre from memoir to commercial fiction this time around to perhaps attract more reviewers. Opinions? Thanks for your help and advice.

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We (my co-creator and I) would be delighted to hear anything feedback you think could help us improve this work. I am especially interested to know if it keeps you wanting to read more. This is a working title and we would also love to have any suggestions on that. Thank you for taking the time to read this! We really appreciate that! We look forward to hearing from you!

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An adventure story for young readers when Ken Carter and Allison Smith discover the secret mystery of the emerald pool.

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Somewhere between last night and this morning love lay in shambles beneath our feet.

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Crying is a good thing, as good as laughter. Shedding tears is a great way to heal the heart and wash Karma from the soul. It's a tender heart that cries, even enrage.

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I have re-hashed this over and over and incorporated all the latest terrific reviews and suggestions into it. Please tell me if I've gotten it right this time :( BTW The spelling is the Australian version of English! We use s's instead of z's LOL

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While watching their marriage dissolve I noted several places where the choice to nurture their growing dislike of each other was made over the choice to continue loving one another.

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