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When I posted six chapters of a novelette, entitled, "Double Take," I received quite a lot of reviews and suggestions. The suggestions were to: Flesh out the characters more, tell us more about the planet and background, add more action, more about Bearach (spelled Baarach in the original), and make it into a novel. I have listened and this is the real beginning. I will revise and insert the original somewhere in the novel. I know where I want to go with it and I will write it as I post it. The main character will still be Ryon, whom you will find was an extraordinary baby. Your former feedback is much appreciated. I hope I have incorporated most of your suggestions in the story.

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If a child is taught from birth that there is no such thing as physical limitation, would that child still be subject to it?

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Hello. I was thinking about what kind of summary to put here and decided that I didn't want to. I'd rather have the reader pick up what the story is about from the story itself. I just hope like all hell it isn't too obscure. I am not a huge fan of exposition without necessity. I prefer character interactions to tell the story, expose personalities and express subtleties. I hope this doesn't turn you off too much, but I gotta be me. Anyway, Let me know how it works out for you. If you want to do proof reading go ahead, but I am more interested in what you think of the characters and plot advancement (as well as how much you enjoy the story). See you around. Update: Regarding the History sections of the chapteres (yes, there will be another one in chapter one). I have a quandry. I don't want to introduce too many concepts to the reader without explanation, but I also don't want to beat people over the head with it too much. So far, I can link the History to the main text obliquly (and hopefully subtly), but I don't know how much longer I can manage that. Let me know what you think

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In the near future, all US citizens are required to serve in the military because of a raging war in the Middle East. Emily Heath is one such person, and she reflects back on her life and how she became the world's most notorious figure by the age of nineteen.

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This had to be divided into two segments because of word limitations. Both parts will be published at the same time to minimize the disruption. I wrote this for a writing class a good-while back. I am thinking of turning it into a novel. Do you think it would work despite the use of clones? I understand that theme has been done-to-death. Any comments would be appreciated. Thanks.

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Premise: Love midst danger can be found anywhere in the universe. I began this novel about two years ago. I have completed about two-thirds of it. It is about a man, John Smith, a widower who found an empress who won him in a murder trial. It is better to start at the beginning, but if you have read up to here and have not reviewed the chapters,feel free to jump in.

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Born of their seeds, kingdom will rise against kingdom. One will hold great mysteries. One will turn the tide. One will not be bound. War is fought, not only on the field, but also within the mind. Nothing is what it seems, take nothing for granted. The gifted are fighting for you. Do you have the right to become an entity? Take the challenge and go with them, as they tap into the unfolding universal truths. Nothing is what it seems, take nothing for granted.

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Terrorcruise, a science fiction adventure, is the story of Tac-Team Captain Axel Fargo's quest to hunt down and kill the terrorist who murdered Axel's wife- a man the Unity Sphere thinks is dead; the terrorist Hetz, who fell before the Unity Fleet once but survived, thanks to powerful new technology, and is set to resume his murderous ways; and Maurel Bright, daughter of one of the Sphere's most powerful businessmen and a target in her own right, simply for being who she is. Terrorcruise is a finished novel in the 105,000 word range. I have never presented it for review in its entirety before and as I earn the credits, hope to post it here for your critiquing pleasure. Any criticism, good or bad, will be appreciated.

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Elise has witnessed the destruction of Earth by Aliens. The aliens turn out to be all too human, ascended from Earth's past. She, and hundreds of other women, are enslaved by their new masters and discover they are to be trained in a unique skill. What could cause these distant earth cousins to annihilate nearly the entire population on Earth? Elise will discover that even the all powerful Emperor Gregor vlor'Malita has something to fear and he is bound and determined to mold her into a tool, against her will, to fight this battle.

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When Charles Bastin dies everyone wants his money, but nobody wants his collection of ugly modern sculptures. Roger Smith, his grandson, inherits the monstosities, and his son, Josh, soon finds out their true nature.

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