Salt Angel

Tiamat Ashtad, or Tash as she is called, is thrown into the middle of a high profile kidnapping when the suspect targets her. She's got to reach inside and learn who she really is to rescue the children and save herself. I'm looking for feedback on everything. Don't worry about being gentle I've got thick skin. I do however ask that you respect myself and my characters. I'm here to learn and grow. :)

• Chapter 1 - Salt Angel"Please let me know if I mis..."
• Chapter 2 - Salt Angel - Chapter 2"This is the new Chapter 2. ..."
• Chapter 3 - Salt Angel - Chapter 3"Any critiques are welcome e..."
• Chapter 4 - Salt Angel - Chapter 4"This is the new Chapter 4 a..."
• Chapter 5 - Salt Angel - Chapter 5"As always, I'm looking for ..."
• Chapter 6 - Salt Angel - Chapter 6"This is the smallest chapte..."
• Chapter 7 - Salt Angel - Chapter 7"For those of you that wante..."
• Chapter 8 - Salt Angel - Chapter 8"As always, I'm looking for ..."
• Chapter 9 - Salt Angel - Chapter 9"Tash has a run in with Kenr..."
• Chapter 10 - Salt Angel - Chapter 10"Tash gets a job offer. (Rev..."
• Chapter 11 - Salt Angel - Chapter 11"Discovery of a species"
• Chapter 12 - Salt Angel - Chapter 12"Angel details."
• Chapter 13 - Salt Angel - Chapter 13 "Tiamat Ashtad, or Tash as s..."
• Chapter 14 - Salt Angel - Chapter 14"It's here! FINALLY!"
• Chapter 15 - Salt Angel - Chapter 15"Revised version. Completely..."
• Chapter 16 - Salt Angel - Chapter 16"Another crisis, of a differ..."
• Chapter 17 - Salt Angel - Chapter 17"Things heat up! :)"
• Chapter 18 - Salt Angel - Chapter 18"I'm humming as I post this ..."
• Chapter 19 - Salt Angel - Chapter 19"This was a fun chapter for me."
• Chapter 20 - Salt Angel - Chapter 20"Mai and Tash fight. It soun..."
• Chapter 21 - Salt Angel - Chapter 21"Darice arrives."
• Chapter 22 - Salt Angel - Chapter 22"Not tons happening here but..."
• Chapter 23 - Salt Angel - Chapter 23"This is the first big actio..."
• Chapter 24 - Salt Angel - Chapter 24"Aftermath of Miranda's kidn..."