Shattered

Hi there and thanks for reading my story. This is my first post so...deep breathe, here I go. I started this a couple of years ago and recently have resurrected it. It starts in a regression and I am not sure that is working out. It may be a bit confusing. But you will read for yourself. It is a story of a young couple facing a loss and how they handled it. It is incomplete and was started as a short story but is turning in to a novel. This is chapter 1. I welcome all well intentioned advice. Thanks!

• Chapter 1 - Shattered"This chapter begins in a re..."