Through the Dark

Basic summary: There have been three people murdered in New York City, all of whom have no physical injuries or wounds, yet cause of death is blood loss. Serena Weller, a current college student, is all too familiar with these types of deaths and knows that she needs to take steps to find the vampire(s) behind it and stop them. Feedback: I'm specifically looking for feedback on my characters and their development (or anything that is unclear). Please correct any grammar that is off. I've tried to proofread, but...you know how it is. Also, please point out any flaws in the plot (anything illogical, unrealistic, too banal, etc).

• Chapter 1 - Prologue - Queen Medb"As a prologue, I'm not sure..."
• Chapter 2 - The First Dead Body"Serena Weller picks up tell..."
• Chapter 3 - Nate"Nate started out as a norma..."
• Chapter 4 - Living with Vampires"Nate becomes immersed in th..."
• Chapter 5 - Investigation"Serena turns to the one per..."
• Chapter 6 - Hunting a Vampire"Serena and Dmitri plan and ..."
• Chapter 7 - The Dead Guy"Serena moves from different..."
• Chapter 8 - Aftermath"Serena and Dmitri are in th..."
• Chapter 9 - The Pack"Nate recounts his first exp..."
• Chapter 10 - The Challenge"This continues Nate's first..."
• Chapter 11 - France"Serena and Randi arrive in ..."
• Chapter 12 - Ghosts from the Past"While Persephone entertains..."
• Chapter 13 - Council"The vampire council meets a..."
• Chapter 14 - The Laurel"Following the council meeti..."
• Chapter 15 - Mondays"As agreed Nate has to spend..."
• Chapter 16 - Alasthai, the wanderer"Nate uncovers a plot to kil..."
• Chapter 17 - Aiston vs. Daniel"When Nate comes home, he fi..."
• Chapter 18 - Daniel's Challenge"Daniel relates the story of..."
• Chapter 19 - how to kill a vampire"I'm pretty sure, I just abo..."
• Chapter 20 - Vampire in the Apartment "Basic summary: There have b..."