Kassian Chronicles: Galactic Double Play

When I posted six chapters of a novelette, entitled, "Double Take," I received quite a lot of reviews and suggestions. The suggestions were to: Flesh out the characters more, tell us more about the planet and background, add more action, more about Bearach (spelled Baarach in the original), and make it into a novel. I have listened and this is the real beginning. I will revise and insert the original somewhere in the novel. I know where I want to go with it and I will write it as I post it. The main character will still be Ryon, whom you will find was an extraordinary baby. Your former feedback is much appreciated. I hope I have incorporated most of your suggestions in the story.

• Chapter 1 - Kidnapped!"This is the beginning of a ..."
• Chapter 2 - Chapter One-Revised. Kidnapped!"After posting the original ..."
• Chapter 3 - Chapters 2 & 3, Ryon Is Adopted"I have two short chapters a..."
• Chapter 4 - Ryon Starts to School"Ryon is growing up and has ..."
• Chapter 5 - The Keep Out Area"Ryon has turned eight and h..."
• Chapter 6 - New Danger on the Horizon"Ryon escapes from the well...."
• Chapter 7 - Suspicion?"The Castermans seek informa..."
• Chapter 8 - Deja Vu? Or New Gift?"Ryon is now a teen, and pro..."
• Chapter 9 - Am I Fired?"Synopsis: As a one-year old..."
• Chapter 10 - Ryon Is Found!"Some time passes in this sh..."
• Chapter 11 - Enter Alaana into Ryon's Life"This chapter and the next s..."
• Chapter 12 - Danger on a Date"Ryon and Alaana become bett..."
• Chapter 13 - The Mysterious Alaana"Ryon is now established as ..."
• Chapter 14 - Sounds of War?"Some time has passed and Ry..."
• Chapter 15 - Ryon and Alaana Marry"This a short chapter, one o..."
• Chapter 16 - Courtship, Marriage, and Trouble"This short chapter covers a..."
• Chapter 17 - Ryon No Longer in the Shadow"This chapter will begin to ..."
• Chapter 18 - Ryon Charged with Spousal Brutality"This is the connecting chap..."
• Chapter 19 - Ryon's Trial for Spousal Abuse"With this chapter, I have c..."
• Chapter 20 - Ryon Found Gulty and Sentenced to Prison"Ryon is now tried and sente..."
• Chapter 21 - A Prison Explosion"In this chapter, Ryon is vi..."
• Chapter 22 - From Prison to the Planet Kassia"A war interrupted and freed..."
• Chapter 23 - Ryon Meets His Biological Parents on Kassia"Chapter 23 is a transitiona..."
• Chapter 24 - Ryon Enrolled in Orientation Class"Having spent some time with..."
• Chapter 25 - A Friend of Ryon's Appears"Ryon is now on Kassia and h..."
• Chapter 26 - Training Completed, Ryon Is Transferred"Ryon completes his studies ..."