This Time You Lose

Written by: Chris Stralyn

Lisa Kaamp operates a small childcare business out of her home in the sleepy little town of Nogeksum, Michigan. Highly respected and known for going the extra mile for her daycare kids, Lisa thought she had handled every daycare emergency possible. But nothing prepared her for the nightmare she now faced. Lisa awakes one morning to find herself bound and gagged, four strange men in her home, and the daycare children being held hostage in the next room. Terrorized by her captors as the authorities work to meet the ransom deadline, she tries negotiating with the men for the release of the children, and soon realizes that at least one of them has no intention of letting anyone go. With the deadline quickly approaching, Lisa must do the unimaginable to protect the children and get everyone out alive.

Chapter 1 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 1 FINAL DRAFT"September 2008 This is t..."
Chapter 2 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 2 FINAL DRAFT"I've made a few revisions t..."
Chapter 3 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 3 FINAL DRAFT"Went through this chapter w..."
Chapter 4 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 4 FINAL DRAFT"This chapter is from Jimmy'..."
Chapter 5 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 5 FINAL DRAFT"Back to Lisa's point of vie..."
Chapter 6 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 6 FINAL DRAFT"Made only minor changes to ..."
Chapter 7 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 7 FINAL DRAFT"I made some slight changes ..."
Chapter 8 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 8 FINAL DRAFT"i made only a few minor adj..."
Chapter 9 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 9 FINAL DRAFT"Okay, edits are done. :) I ..."
Chapter 10 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 10 FINAL DRAFT"I made several changes in t..."
Chapter 11 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 11 FINAL DRAFT"I made a few changes to thi..."
Chapter 12 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 12 FINAL DRAFT"Finally done with the edits..."
Chapter 13 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 13 FINAL DRAFT"Went through this chapter a..."
Chapter 14 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 14 FINAL DRAFT"Adjusted this chapter just ..."
Chapter 15 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 15 FINAL DRAFT"Worked hard to eliminate al..."
Chapter 16 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 16 FINAL DRAFT"Made a few grammar correcti..."
Chapter 17 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 17 FINAL DRAFT"Struggled with changing the..."
Chapter 18 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 18 FINAL DRAFT"Made some minor changes to ..."
Chapter 19 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 19 FINAL DRAFT"Sorry so long with this edi..."
Chapter 20 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 20 FINAL DRAFT"Made a few subtle changes t..."
Chapter 21 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 21 FINAL DRAFT"I made a few small changes ..."
Chapter 22 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 22 FINAL DRAFT"Several small changes in th..."
Chapter 23 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 23 FINAL DRAFT"Made several changes to thi..."
Chapter 24 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 24 FINAL DRAFT"Made a few minor changes to..."
Chapter 25 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 25 FINAL DRAFT"Minor changes throughout, b..."
Chapter 26 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 26 FINAL DRAFT"Did a lot of editing to thi..."
Chapter 27 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 27 FINAL DRAFT"Cleaned up this chapter a b..."
Chapter 28 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 28 FINAL DRAFT"Short chapter from Jimmy's ..."
Chapter 29 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 29 FINAL DRAFT"Made a few changes to try a..."
Chapter 30 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 30 FINAL DRAFT"Made some changes to this c..."
Chapter 31 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 31 FINAL DRAFT"Only a few small changes to..."
Chapter 32 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 32 FINAL DRAFT"Played with this chapter fa..."
Chapter 33 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 33 FINAL DRAFT"Only minor changes to this ..."
Chapter 34 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 34 FINAL DRAFT"Again, only minor changes t..."
Chapter 35 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 35 FINAL DRAFT"Made only one change to thi..."
Chapter 36 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 36 FINAL DRAFT"Shortened some sentences to..."
Chapter 37 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 37 FINAL DRAFT"Reworded a few sentences to..."
Chapter 38 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 38 FINAL DRAFT"Short chapter to raise the ..."
Chapter 39 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 39 FINAL DRAFT"Did a lot of rewording in t..."
Chapter 40 - This Time You Lose - Chapter 40 FINAL DRAFT"Made some changes to this c..."