WHO KILLED TOM JONES?

This is my NaNo novel, a cozy mystery I started this summer with a paper-thin idea that one of the impersonators at a Tom Jones festival is murdered. I gave it to an editorial consultant who's helped me with other pieces and she said I should start the story at the festival rather than at the rest home. Anyway, if you read the first chapter, does this new one work better? Thanks for letting me know if it has potential and what could be better.

• Chapter 1 - Ellie meets 'Delilah'"When Ellie Tetzel, a closet..."
• Chapter 2 - Back at the Nipple . . ."Back the Nipple Rest Home w..."