The Castlegate Club

This is a repost of the inciting incident of a novel based on the suggestions I received. I'm sure I didn't make all the suggestions that were given to me because there were many of them and it became mind boggling trying to remember them all. I hope I did a little better this time around. Any suggestions will help.

• Chapter 1 - Benjamin"Three big college basketbal..."
• Chapter 1 - The Beginning"I'm trying to start the sto..."