Dark Knight

Okay, so first this probably falls into the urban fantasy/romance section. Here's my summary: Thousands of years ago demons were imprisoned in Tartarus, the deepest and darkest realm of Hell, only granted leave when summoned by magic, where they continually seek chaos and destruction. All that stands in their way is a group of nine vampire warriors. Eadbert Zarathustra, known to his brothers as EZ, has always been the most reckless of the warriors, throwing himself haphazardly into the demons’ paths. But after almost killing himself during the brotherhood’s last mission, he is sent to find the daughter of one of his fallen comrades who is a unique half vampire. Unwittingly, he finds himself enamored with her roommate who is all too human. But his attraction to her puts her life at risk, and he is forced to sacrifice everything he knows in order to save her. Deanna Russell Devereaux has never been normal. From her first awareness, she has been able to sense the thoughts and feelings of people around her. Equally terrified and intrigued to the tall dark stranger who emerges out of the shadows and kidnaps her and her best friend, she worries he might be the death of her. But when she is mistaken for someone else and taken hostage by a group of vampires hunters, she dreams of him, both hoping and fearing he will come to rescue her. Any feedback is appreciated :) My title is terribly unoriginal so if you can think of anything better, feel free to let me know.

• Chapter 1 - Dark Knight"Okay, so first this is a ro..."
• Chapter 2 - Banishing the demon"Feel free to comment on any..."
• Chapter 3 - Death of a Brother "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 4 - Deanna "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 5 - sisters "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 6 - lovestruck "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 7 - someone's outside "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 8 - honoring the dead "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 9 - getting kidnapped "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 10 - stockholm syndrome "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 11 - the crime scene "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 12 - silencing the screaming "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 13 - naked vampire "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 14 - jedi mind tricks "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 15 - playing doctor "Okay, so first this probabl..."
• Chapter 16 - Giving Blood "Okay, so first this probabl..."