Cloak and Dagger Swagger (first edit)

This story is based on historical events. The characters have been created to simulate what actually occurred. I would like to know if the writing is convincing.

• Chapter 1 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."A young man about to gradua..."
• Chapter 2 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."I accept a job offer from t..."
• Chapter 3 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."I begin work and life in We..."
• Chapter 4 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."I get filled in on the Cold..."
• Chapter 5 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."A sub-rosa call to the Chie..."
• Chapter 6 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Frank confronts Griswold. T..."
• Chapter 7 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Martina's story - Part I."
• Chapter 8 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."The Embassy Party."
• Chapter 9 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Crisis imminent in Berlin. ..."
• Chapter 10 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."A night to remember, before..."
• Chapter 11 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Dinner with Helmut Stabler...."
• Chapter 12 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."We depart Warsaw and head f..."
• Chapter 13 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."The Bulgarian gambit unfold..."
• Chapter 14 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Clandestine meetings with C..."
• Chapter 15 - Cloak & Dagger Swagger"Washington agog but wary ab..."
• Chapter 16 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger"Mary makes her (his) wishes..."
• Chapter 17 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Dad answers an important qu..."
• Chapter 18 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."I return to Germany and Mar..."
• Chapter 19 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."I wake up in an East Berlin..."
• Chapter 20 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."I'm relieved to return to W..."
• Chapter 21 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."A visit with Pam doesn't go..."
• Chapter 22 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Contentious meetings with C..."
• Chapter 23 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Helmut gives us the call. C..."
• Chapter 24 - Cloak & Dagger Swagger"Helmut makes plans to extri..."
• Chapter 25 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Lunch the next day at Karls..."
• Chapter 26 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Return to West Berlin with ..."
• Chapter 27 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."I return to the apartment a..."
• Chapter 28 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Martina and I discuss my re..."
• Chapter 29 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Another tantalizing meeting..."
• Chapter 30 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Tatiana gives me an empty b..."
• Chapter 31 - Cloak and Dagger Swagger."Colonel Rykov has his airs ..."
• Chapter 32 - Epilogue"What happened in the years ..."