Caught At Last (Revised with alternative ending)

A night at karaoke has a twist. Any comments would be helpful. Thanks. Vern PS: This has been revised with an alternative ending also added. Both endings are included, with the original in {{{ }}}. Which is preferable in your opinion? And do the other changes help should you recognize them - mostly added dialogue and descriptive phrasing.

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